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Re: Typos

by Raefnal » Mon Sep 16, 2019 8:16 am

Found more. After saying lesson on wheel of time:


Seaine Sedai em makes a gesture, putting her two index fingers together.


And this after saying lesson on intro - should be rulers.

Yukiri Sedai says 'A whole hallway on the Blue level is dedicated to memorizing the rules who signed the Compact.'

After saying lesson on ten nations:

Yukiri Sedai em gestures at a map on the wall.

Re: Typos

by Raefnal » Mon Sep 16, 2019 8:02 am

When Romanda talks about Ogier she says:

* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Full >
Romanda Sedai says 'They are half as tall as a man, with tufted ears and very large noses.'

I think this should be "half again as tall" or "twice as tall". This makes them sound like hobbits. :)

Re: Typos

by Sanguine » Fri Sep 13, 2019 9:58 pm

Are these typos getting fixed? Seems like there is a more efficient way to do those. DB export and spell check, or run a script to log all descriptions via room IDs, etc. Probably so many more typos out there undiscovered!

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Fri Sep 13, 2019 4:30 pm

Zone: Andoran Countryside East
Room: Fast Moving River
Mob: a silvery fish

* HP:Healthy MV:Full > con fish
Well, it is taller than you, lighter than you, and in general less stocky than you.
You could do it with a needle!

* HP:Healthy MV:Fresh > stat
You are a 18 year old male human warrior.
Your height is 5 feet, 11 inches, and you weigh 187.0 lbs.

I think some lake trout can get to Maybe ~50 inches, but this guy seems a bit big. ;)

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Thu Sep 12, 2019 7:27 pm

Zone: Cairhien
Room: various
Mob: a lord's fool

A short, dumpy man dances and prances all for the satisfacation of the lord
he follows. As he moves, the bells that are sewn to his oversized coat
jingle and jangle. He lets out a jolly laugh in hopes of entertaining.

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Thu Sep 12, 2019 7:14 pm

Zone: Cairhien
Room: Jangai Gate
Mob: a Cairhien gateguard

Eyes forward and erect, this short guard is responsibile for holding the bad
element from the city. He may not seem to notice anything, but it can be
assured that he catches every little thing that goes on in the area.

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Thu Sep 12, 2019 7:03 pm

Zone: Tar Valon
Room: Erol's Fine Tailoring
Mob: a skilled craftswoman

A skilled craftswoman contemplates her next commission.

A short woman stands here, her face framed by a bob of dark hair adorned
with tortoiseshell combs. Her eyes are brown and steady in their regard,
and a pair of exquisite brass-framed spectacles sits upon her nose.
Although dressed in typically Cairhienin garb, a number of belts crisscross
her body laden with files, saws, chisels, bobbins of thread and other fine
tools. An intricately embroidered damascene needle case is tied to her
right arm with a yellow ribbon.

A skilled craftswoman is in excellent condition.

* HP:Healthy MV:Fresh > con woman
Well, it is shorter than you, lighter than you, and in general less stocky than you.

Despite being clearly called a woman, she cons as a neuter and does not respond to the "female" keyword.

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Thu Sep 12, 2019 6:45 pm

Zone: Tar Valon Road South of Tar Valon
Room: Foot of the Bridge
Mob: a Tar Valon bridgeguard

A strong and stalwart warrior, the guard's measuring gaze passes over the
flowing masses with steady attention and discernment. He is an unmoving
pillar of defense against any who might lay seige on Tar Valon's gates.

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Thu Sep 12, 2019 5:39 pm

Zone: New Far Madding North
Room: Beneath a Majestic, Pearl Blue Dome
Mob: a scribe

Beneath a Majestic, Pearl Blue Dome
High overhead, the intricate architecture of the dome arcs at least a
hundred feet or more toward the peak. Spreading out across the floor is a
maze of blue and white tiles converging on a double-pointed red oval
trimmed with yellow. Three stools lie along the chambers outer edge forming
a perfect triangle, each sitting beside a small crystal sphere. The spheres
themselves are built of a clouded crystal wrapped with metal collars, each
inscribed with strange numerical markings.
[ obvious exits: N E W ]
Three clouded crystal wedges point toward the center of the room.
A scribe stands here, a portable desk hung from his shoulders.
A clean shaven street guard stands here on patrol.
A clean shaven street guard stands here on patrol.
A clean shaven street guard stands here on patrol.
A clean shaven street guard stands here on patrol.
A clean shaven street guard stands here on patrol.
A clean shaven street guard stands here on patrol.
An aged Wall Guard stands here, ready to handle the Guards gear.
Aleis Barsalla, the First Counsel of Far Madding stands here.

* HP:Healthy MV:Strong > l scribe
A scribe stands here, a portable desk hung from his shoulders.

A scribe is in excellent condition.

a scribe is using:
<held> a fine quill pen
<worn about body> a long red coat
<worn on legs> plain brown pants
<worn on feet> a pair of light leather boots

His detailed description is the same as his long description, for some reason.

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Wed Sep 11, 2019 8:11 pm

Zone: New Far Madding North
Room: Beneath a Majestic, Pearl Blue Dome
Mob: Aleis Barsalla, First Counsel of Far Madding

Clad in the distinguised robes of the Counsel, Aleis Barsalla greets all
visitors of importance to Far Madding. Jet black hair, trimmed with wings
of white frame a face unlined by age, yet showing the worn look of a person
with many problems on her mind. A tiara sits atop her head, marking her
rank as First Counsel of Far Madding.

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