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Re: Typos

Post by Nevirha » Tue Jul 16, 2019 9:11 pm

South and west of Watch Hill near volcano:

Mount Olive
The mountains to the west are sometimes visible through the rotating
clouds. Broken stones ring the center of the hill. Small brush is survives
between the rocks of the summit.

Re: Typos

Post by Taziar » Wed Jul 10, 2019 12:16 am

Zone: Boats and Ships

Zone emote does not have punctuation: Forked lightning stabs at the mast of the ship

Re: Typos

Post by Lea » Mon Jul 08, 2019 12:20 am

A House
Smaller than the other houses on the street, the white-washed walls
convey little of that homey feeling. The funishings are plain and simple
yet the meticulous neatness of the place makes it seem greater somehow.
[ obvious exits: N ]
A bed sits here.
A lovely young dancer is here, wincing with discomfort.

Re: Typos

Post by Lea » Mon Jul 08, 2019 12:19 am

A Lord's Manor
This house is small, and its size alone is testimony to the fact that a
minor lord lives here. While the house is not large, it is richly
furnished, with thick, beautiful rugs that cover the floors, and beautiful
carvings that cover the nooks and crannies of the house. Large, square
windows add to the airy feel of the manor, and through one of the windows,
behind the house, can be seen a small garden that looks very well tended.
[ obvious exits: S ]
A bookshelf made from imported wood stands against the wall here.
A finely-woven rug lies rolled up on the ground.
A Cairhien nobleman lies here, suffering greatly.

* HP:Healthy SP:Strong MV:Fresh > l cairhien
Though lying in a prone position, this man gives the feeling that he's more
important than you are. His body is covered with boils and lesions; he
reaks of a sick room. He is by no means a handsome man and is remarkably
frail in stature.

A Cairhien nobleman is in excellent condition.

Re: Typos

Post by Talem » Mon May 27, 2019 6:46 pm

By the Excavation
The rock of the escarpment that is Kinslayer's Dagger sweeps high above,
jabbing into the sky as well as the fertile Cairhien lands. A large hole
has been dug in the side of the hill, easily ten times as long as it is
wid. The clay sides are held back by beams. The excavation has unearthed a
hand holding a perfect crystal sphere and a little distance further is a
large stone face. Not far away lies the hilltop village of Tremonsien.

Re: Typos

Post by Reyne » Sun May 12, 2019 3:28 pm

l dragonsworn

This young man walks around with an upbeat cheer and confident stride.
Despite his tender age, he is a true believer that the Dragon will soon be
revealead. He is one of many who have left their homes and joined the
legions of Dragonsworn in the hopes of fighting for the Light and humanity
when the time for the Last Battle comes.

A youthful Dragonsworn is in excellent condition.
A youthful Dragonsworn is healthy.

Re: Typos

Post by Adael » Sat May 04, 2019 7:21 pm

* HP:Scratched MV:Full >
In the northwest corner of the vault one is standing on a yellow tile, in the southwest corner one
is standing on a blue tile, in the southeast corner one is standing on a red tile, in the northeast
corner near the valut entrace one is standing on a blue tile.

In Justice.

Re: Typos

Post by Yuna » Sat Apr 13, 2019 3:38 pm

Resting Chambers of the Sedai
A large lounge area has many small doors to small bedchambers. While
technically any bedchamber is available to any sister, certain rooms are
traditionally used by each ajah. A large couch and other furniture lie
here, where sisters occasionally congregate before bed.

A BIG SIGN is here.
A NEW NOTICE to READ is pinned to the wall.
[ obvious exits: W ]

look sign

Say "intructions please" for information on the new record-keeping system.

Say "please read contents" for a list of sub-topics.

Say "sitter chest" for info on the new Sitter office.

Say "records chest" for info on the new office to use for ANT records.



I believe this should be 'instructions'.

Re: Typos

Post by Reyne » Thu Apr 11, 2019 2:38 pm

Dunno if a typo necessarily but:

A well-traveled merchant whispers to you, 'Additionally, I have two sets of clothing currently for trade for the low price of five-hundred gold crowns.'

A well-traveled merchant whispers to you, 'I have a set of this here heavy armor, a set of light-weight clothing or a set of deflective clothing, it's your choice!'


The bolded 'two' should be 'three.'

Then also:

A well-traveled merchant says 'Whats it to be then, do you want the heavy armor or the light armor, Reyne?'
You say 'deflective armor'
A well-traveled merchant says 'The deflective clothing for parrying and striking! Good choice, Reyne.'


Whats should be What's, and I think he should say 'What's it to be then, do you want the heavy armor, light armor, or deflective armor, Reyne?

Re: Typos

Post by Rentris » Tue Apr 02, 2019 8:13 am

Jorran Burdal's room in Eagle Manor

The Strategy Room
Maps of all sorts and sized are stacked in high piles in this room, which
is in dire need of cleaning, with cobwebs hanging from the ceiling beams.
The only parts of the room not coated in dust are an area surrounding a
desk and the path leading to the door. A white flag with a large red eagle
hangs across the back wall. A table stands to the , on the polished wood
lies an abandoned sheet of paper bearing the name of Razzor.

[ obvious exits: W ]

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