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Re: Typos

by Reyne » Tue Nov 19, 2019 3:54 pm

all e of Falme gate:
Falme Road
Rugged hills with sparse vegetation surround you in all directions. Some
of the hollows are filled with brush and small trees, most of the hilltops are
bare. Yet the air smells of the sea, and gulls are a regular sight overhead.
The road contines east and west from here.
[ obvious exits: N W ]
I think the "east and west" is erroneous also as the exits are N and W.

Re: Typos

by Raefnal » Tue Nov 19, 2019 8:39 am

No full stop on broker mob.

In a Quaint Nook
The stalls in this area of the Market Hall are devoid of flashy and shiny
items, but plain and unadorned items have been placed on coarse burlap
cloth. Some of the items are tools such as spades and rakes, while others
are raw materials. Some of the stalls sell jars and bottles of oils to take
care of the items on sale in this nook.
[ obvious exits: E ]
A sturdy fell pony stands here, multi-colored tubes protruding from its saddlebags.
A stout man stands guard here.
A broker stands here, selling raw materials

Re: Typos

by Tiani » Mon Nov 18, 2019 9:26 pm

A Herbalist's House
[ obvious exits: E ]
A deft herbalist stands here, packaging herbs.
A merchant guard eyes you warily, intent on keeping order.
A merchant guard eyes you warily, intent on keeping order.
Tharal Karvuin, dealer in herbs and lore stands here.

In FM. Title should be An Herbalist's House.

Re: Typos

by Constantine » Wed Nov 13, 2019 5:44 pm

* S HP:Hurt MV:Fresh - : Wounded - Salan Mondoran: Beaten >
Salan Mondoran lances 's body.

Salan Mondroan disappears with a flash of light!

Re: Typos

by Raefnal » Sat Nov 09, 2019 6:28 pm

It is a curved clear dagger.
It is a short blade.
It is in quite used.

Re: Typos

by Sanguine » Sat Nov 09, 2019 5:51 pm

Down with the Oxford comma!

Re: Typos

by Taziar » Sat Nov 09, 2019 1:41 pm

Elysia wrote:
Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:20 am
Taziar wrote:
Sat Sep 07, 2019 3:08 pm
Cairhien War Office
This chamber is a prime example of military chaotic efficiency. Several
tables stand in the room, each with its own purpose. A table in the corner
bears refreshments, while against the wall a desk stands at the ready for
any missives to be written. A chandelier bearing many mirrored candles
hangs above a massive table which is covered with maps in various sizes,
showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.
[ obvious exits: W ]
Last sentence: showing troop deployments and supply- and messenger lines.
Not sure what's wrong with that?
there is a dash after the word supply, and and and... too many ands?

Possible solution:
showing troop deployments, supply routes, and messenger lines.
would have to remove the comma at the end of the sentence above that though.

The main thing was the random dash typo :) after the word supply

Re: Typos

by Sanguine » Sat Nov 09, 2019 3:15 am


Re: Typos

by Elysia » Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:54 am

As a random observation, I have not fixed the mobs with missing descs. Writing mob descs is probably the worst part about imming, because there are only so many different types of men and women and at some point you just don't bother. It's like writing a whole zone of basement.

Re: Typos

by Elysia » Fri Nov 08, 2019 10:32 am

Thuvia wrote:
Fri Sep 13, 2019 4:30 pm
Zone: Andoran Countryside East
Room: Fast Moving River
Mob: a silvery fish

* HP:Healthy MV:Full > con fish
Well, it is taller than you, lighter than you, and in general less stocky than you.
You could do it with a needle!

* HP:Healthy MV:Fresh > stat
You are a 18 year old male human warrior.
Your height is 5 feet, 11 inches, and you weigh 187.0 lbs.

I think some lake trout can get to Maybe ~50 inches, but this guy seems a bit big. ;)
Not necessarily:

It might be that the desc doesn't reflect it's that type of fish, but there are giant freshwater fish out there.