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Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Wed Aug 21, 2019 8:10 pm

Zone: Taren Ferry

Mob: Finnegan

A hard looking man with a scar on his left cheek brushes a horse absently
as he watches you. He dosent look like he is from around here and isn't
very friendly. No one seems to know any name for him other than Finnegan.
He begins to scowl at you and demands to know if you are here on bussiness.

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Sat Aug 17, 2019 5:25 pm

Mob: an anxious aide

l anxious
It has no description.

Not really a typo per se, but no detailed description for this guy.

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Sat Aug 17, 2019 5:23 pm

Master Al'Dail

Master Al'Dail is here looking after his farm.

Master Al'Dail is clearly a farmer; his sunburned, leathery skin and his
large frame clearly attest to that. His hair is peppered with grey, but his
movements show the strength and grace of a much younger man.


Gavin Al'Dail

Gavin Al'Dail is doing his chores here.

Gavin Al'Dail is a tall, rather thin young man. The down of his approaching
manhood is just appearing on his finely shaped features. His nose is long
and thin, just like his face. He moves very slowly about his chores; he
obviously does not like doing them.

I believe it should be "al'Dail" instead of "Al'Dail" in both cases

Re: Typos

by Thuvia » Sat Aug 17, 2019 3:03 pm

Mistress Neehan is a short, somewhat hunched lady with hair that is beginning
to lose its color. She is hardly a defenseless woman; the strenous life of
working on a farm has apparently equipped her well to take care of herself.
Mistress Nehan is in excellent condition.

Name should be "Nehan", and the other typo

Re: Typos

by Talimar » Sat Aug 17, 2019 1:32 am

This is sort of nitpicky, but the Discrete man in KMG rent should be Discreet Man. Unless the original intent was for him to be a separate, completely distinct man, in which case, ignore me.

Re: Typos

by Dartes » Fri Aug 09, 2019 6:45 pm

Hawkwind! Dragons and Fables.

Re: Typos

by Razhak » Fri Aug 09, 2019 6:14 pm

o HP:Healthy DP:Bursting MV:Strong > Hallway of Art
Works of art from a lost time decorate this hall. Huge murals adorn the roof,
while along the walls tapestries and paintings are placed. The paintings are
nameless, the painters likewise, but they are beautiful works and have
survived time remarkably well.
[ obvious exits: N S ]
A shadow stallion has arrived from the north.

* HP:Healthy DP:Bursting MV:Strong > l painting
This painting shows the siege of Tar Valon, with Arthur Hawkwind in the
foreground. His shadow seems unnaturally still, his eyes reflect a distant
fire. Somehow, every stroke of the quill gives hidden meanings, details within
details. It is somehow disturbing.

Re: Typos

by Razhak » Fri Aug 09, 2019 6:12 pm

Not a typo perse, but Jain Farstrider was not a (false) dragon:

Hall of Dragons
This hall is decorated by banners in red and gold, each with a golden dragon on
white, and below each, a statue. Each statue has a plaque, and each plaque but
one has a name. The last statue is on a pedestal, and looks melted, with few or
no details, unfinished. By its side is two figurines, each also unfinished.
[ obvious exits: E W ]
A shadow stallion has arrived from the west.

* HP:Healthy DP:Full MV:Tiring > l statue
It is impossible to say who or what the statue might be off ... yet somehow it
seems to be gaining shape and detail, almost imperceptibly, but happening all
the same.

* HP:Healthy DP:Full MV:Tiring > l plaque
The plaques read: Lews Therin Telamon, Jain Farstrider, Raolin Darksbane,
Guaire Amalasan, Yurian Stonebow, Davian, Logain.

Re: Typos

by lishaia » Wed Aug 07, 2019 1:22 pm

A projectiles broker says 'I will then check my stock and if a seller has dropped of the item, I will give it to you.'

Should be "off"

Re: Typos

by Nevirha » Tue Jul 16, 2019 9:11 pm

South and west of Watch Hill near volcano:

Mount Olive
The mountains to the west are sometimes visible through the rotating
clouds. Broken stones ring the center of the hill. Small brush is survives
between the rocks of the summit.