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Re: Typos

Post by Priscilla » Sun Apr 22, 2018 1:25 am

A personnel trainer (at least the one in Four Kings) doesn't have a description:

* R HP:Healthy MV:Full > l trainer
It has no description.

A personnel trainer is in excellent condition.

a personnel trainer is using:
<worn on head> a metal helmet
<worn on body> a thick mail shirt
<worn on arms> a set of thin metal vambraces
<worn on hands> a pair of metal half-gauntlets
<wielded> a lathe practice sword
<worn on legs> a pair of thin metal leggings
<worn on feet> a pair of thin metal boots

Re: Typos

Post by Elyse » Wed Apr 18, 2018 3:01 pm

Not quite a typo, but the newish Maredo smob's description could probably use an action. "Bryn Plambo, the Shadow-bound noble plots here," or some similar thing. Or, since the room is no-channel, perhaps "disrupts the true source here." :P *pout*

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A Stone Chamber
A small stone chamber made from blocks of gray stone is bare of all
ornamentation and decorations. The air in the room is stale and old due
to lack of circulation, but very cool with the walls of the chamber are
slick with condensation. The gray stone floor is smooth and slippery
with puddles of water.
[ obvious exits: E ]
A newly turned recruit of the Shadow tries to slip past you.
A newly turned recruit of the Shadow tries to slip past you.
A towering, hunch-backed trolloc glares maliciously as he lumbers by.
A towering, hunch-backed trolloc glares maliciously as he lumbers by.
A towering, hunch-backed trolloc glares maliciously as he lumbers by.
A huge darkhound is here, drooling and snarling.
Bryn Plambo, the Shadow-bound noble.

Re: Typos

Post by Octavio » Thu Apr 05, 2018 4:38 pm

Room name is Westwood

Sounds of wildlife drift through the impenetrable wall of trees surrounding
this area. Here, deep in the thick Westwood, the old growth mixes overwhelms
the new growth, but there is still enough space to move around. To the north
and west, the Westwood forms an impenetrable veil of trees, but to the east
and south, the open space continues.

It is where the leatherleaf tree load at the EF and Watch Hill boarder is.

Re: Typos

Post by Itesh » Thu Apr 05, 2018 4:10 pm

Octavio wrote:In Westwood where the leatherleaf trees are this showed up:

Clouds chase eachother across the sky.


Try and include a room name - there are a lot of leatherleaf trees in the Westwood.

Re: Typos

Post by Octavio » Thu Apr 05, 2018 8:37 am

In Westwood where the leatherleaf trees are this showed up:

Clouds chase eachother across the sky.

Re: Typos

Post by Meren » Fri Mar 23, 2018 4:55 pm

The herald of Lugard says 'This first one is way out west, out on the Amoth Plain.'

Re: Typos

Post by Octavio » Tue Mar 13, 2018 4:14 pm

At the entrance to the IA clan room, when asking for quests:

A grizzled officer says 'Task 3:' A grizzled officer says 'Dogs are known not to respond with agression to our damane.'

Re: Typos

Post by Yuna » Tue Feb 27, 2018 5:30 am

- Accepted Maighan says 'You may only complete a tasks once, unless specified otherwise.'

- Somewhere deep in Tar Valon: [...] it's coppery taste [...] ( exact sequence lost to forum reset)

- White Ajah tasks:
A shapely young woman says 'Youll find him to the north.'

A puzzled man says 'Heres my puzzle. Pay fair attention, I wont [...]

A puzzled man says 'The moment you start to paddle up the river a fisherman looses one of his bobbers

A puzzled man gives you a white ticket bearing one strange symbol.. (extra . )
A puzzled man gives you a white ticket bearing three strange symbols.. (extra . )
A puzzled man gives you a white ticket bearing four strange symbols.. (extra . )

Seaine Sedai says 'The logical conclusion is that you were more than capable of passing this mans test.'

Re: Typos

Post by Felanin » Fri Feb 23, 2018 3:22 pm

Inside Dsworn base:

The Lord's Study
kill tree mammoth desk stands in the center of this room, a stained glass
window framing the upper reaches of the furthest wall. Heavy book shelves

Darkfriend trooper description (NE of FD, Winding ctf patty)

Post by xarim » Thu Feb 22, 2018 7:49 am

* S HP:Healthy MV:Fresh >
l trooper
This man, obviously from one of the southlands, is wearing mismatched even
his arms are covered by one vambraces and one chainmail sleeve
. He was
clearly not among the soldiering class when he was still living back home.
armor. His tunic is made from a different material than his leggings an just ends here, nothing further

A darkfriend trooper is in excellent condition.

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