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Re: Typos

Post by Rif » Fri Feb 02, 2018 10:18 am

I don't want to post the whole thing, but Bardomir's parchment misspells 'jeopardize'.

The Lord's Study
A mammoth desk stands in the center of this room, a stained glass window
framing the upper reaches of the furthest wall. Heavy book shelves stand
sentry along each wall, their sides lined with pigeonholes for scrolls and
maps. A large world map is unrolled on the desktop, held in place with
candlesticks. A parchment on the wall reads "My Rules - My Way".
[ obvious exits: W ]
No matches found!
West: A hopeful young man stands here, gripping his weapon.
Eyes glowing with hope, a follower of the Dragon stands here.
Bardomir Lazar, the Dragon Reborn, is confidently standing here.
Bardomir Lazar is surrounded by a shimmering white aura!
* HP:Healthy MV:Fresh >
l parchment

<Redacted> jeapordize <Redacted>

The Dragonsworn are to fight the Shadow at all times. Obey the laws of
countries at all times, unless I directly order otherwise. Be courteous. I
will not tolerate rudeness or stupidity in any form towards anyone,
regardless of how private you think you are.

Protect the weak. Show them the way to salvation. Help those who need it.
Kill the Shadow wherever it lies.

The path of daggers is our future.

Re: Typos

Post by Adael » Sat Jan 27, 2018 8:02 pm

* HP:Scratched MV:Strong > The Throne Room
You are stunned by the size and splendor of Queen Morgase's Throne Room.
The walls present hunting scenes carved in relief in stone of the purest
white. Tapestries between the carvings are of bright flowers and
brilliantly plumaged hummingbirds, except for the ones flanking the throne
which proudly display the White Lion of Andor. On a dais at the room's far
wall is a throne of marble. A greatdoor opens south into a large hall and
an officedoor opens east into the Queen's private study. A smaller archway
lies to the west.
[ obvious exits: E S W ]
Door east: officedoor
Door south: greatdoor
Door west: conferencedoors
A wily minstrel plays a tender song.
A Defender of the Rose Crown strides by, hand close to his weapon.
A Defender of the Rose Crown strides by, hand close to his weapon.
A Defender of the Rose Crown strides by, hand close to his weapon.
A Defender of the Rose Crown strides by, hand close to his weapon.
A Defender of the Rose Crown strides by, hand close to his weapon.
A Defender of the Rose Crown strides by, hand close to his weapon.
A Defender of the Rose Crown strides by, hand close to his weapon.
A Defender of the Rose Crown strides by, hand close to his weapon.
An elite Lion Warden stands at his post.
An elite Lion Warden stands at his post.
An elite Lion Warden stands at his post.
An elite Lion Warden stands at his post.
Gawyn Trakand, First Prince of the Sword, stands here.

* HP:Scratched MV:Strong >
l dais
Flanked by the tapestries of the White Lion, the dais proudly displays
the Throne of Andor at it's center. Almost hidden a small stool sits in
the shadows behind the throne.

* HP:Scratched MV:Strong >

Should be "its", without the apostrophe.

Re: Typos

Post by Etain » Sun Jan 14, 2018 2:10 pm

l romanda
This woman's gray hair, worn in a bon at the nape of her neck, is a
testament to her age. Dark eyes are set in a face that looks ever ready to
scold someone. This woman exudes a commanding, yet grandmotherly air.

Romanda Sedai is in excellent condition.
Romanda Sedai is healthy.

Romanda Sedai is using:
<held> a small purse
<worn on finger> a great serpent ring
<worn on body> a colorful dress
<worn on arms> a White Tower shawl
<worn on feet> a pair of light leather boots

Should read 'bun'.

Re: Typos

Post by Nevirha » Fri Jan 05, 2018 10:25 am

An Overgrown Path
This appears to be a trail, overgrown from years of disuse. The grass and brush
which had covered the path are now dead and brittle. The brush gets thicker to
the west, and tall, dark trees loom in the distance. The path continues to the
east, amidst a stunted swarm of rotting, oozing vegetation. The air takes on a
definite tinge of decay and death.
[ obvious exits: E W ]
A warhorse is here, stamping his feet impatiently, being ridden by you.
Roest al'Karios, Knight Bachelier is standing here mending a weapon, riding a Domani razor.
You smell something remniscent of death as you enter this place.
Callesa has arrived from the east, riding a wild stallion.
Bernice has arrived from the east, riding a gray palfrey.

Re: Typos

Post by Rig » Thu Jan 04, 2018 6:54 pm

Call him a pussy

Re: Typos

Post by Astolfo » Wed Jan 03, 2018 10:27 am

Shimu wrote:
Elysia wrote:I can't believe I'm posting this...

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/pussy


Haha, ok so it was not meant to be puffy, got it. Astolfo you speak at that level still guy.


Cuts like a knife!

Re: Typos

Post by Shimu » Wed Jan 03, 2018 10:09 am

Elysia wrote:I can't believe I'm posting this...

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/pussy


Haha, ok so it was not meant to be puffy, got it. Astolfo you speak at that level still guy.

Re: Typos

Post by Astolfo » Wed Jan 03, 2018 9:39 am

Wotmud users all read at a sixth grade level, literally.

Re: Typos

Post by Elysia » Wed Jan 03, 2018 9:33 am

I can't believe I'm posting this...

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/pussy

Re: Typos

Post by Ryak » Wed Jan 03, 2018 1:29 am

I think they mean containing pus. Pussy might be fine.

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