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Re: Typos

Post by Taziar » Fri Jul 21, 2017 10:42 pm

Tanchico Road zone: Old entrance to Elmora cutoff.

Bend in the Path
The path turns slightly to the south-west due to the thick population of
trees, bushes and other plants growing in the south. The path continues to
the west and north, but a recently cut trail to the east pushes into the
Tarabon woodlands.

[ obvious exits: N W ]

Since the connection with the zone to the east is now gone the bold portion above should be adjusted or removed.

Re: Typos

Post by Tamira » Fri Jul 21, 2017 12:56 pm

A Domani man is in the room.
A Domani woman walks into the room.
A Domani man says to a Domani woman, "blah blah blah blah"
A Domani man says 'I would give you all I am, if you were mind.'

Re: Typos

Post by alima » Wed Jul 19, 2017 10:57 pm

You're so punny!

Re: Typos

Post by Vampa » Wed Jul 19, 2017 4:13 pm

That's just a red herring.

bark or barque (bɑrk)

n.
1. a sailing vessel having three or more masts, square-rigged on all but the aftermost.
2. (formerly) any boat or sailing vessel.

Re: Typos

Post by alima » Mon Jul 17, 2017 10:23 pm

* R HP:Healthy MV:Full >
The bark docks at Falme in a fluid motion.

* R HP:Healthy MV:Full > look
Aboard the Red Herring
A strong and sturdy boat, this three-masted bark has sufficient
accommodation for a large amount of people and cargo and the ability to
sustain them for a longer journey. Although judging from the rigging and
sails it is not originally a Seanchan vessel, it now serves the Empire. A
skiff is hanging in brackets on the starboard side.
[ obvious exits: ]
Talroc the Officer is standing here.
|1|.A warhorse is here, stamping his feet impatiently, being ridden by you.
A captain stands here, giving orders.


This is the boat from Tremalking to Falme.

Should probably be:

The boat docks at Falme in a fluid motion.

Re: Typos

Post by alima » Wed Jul 12, 2017 11:25 pm

Feneon wrote:If you are interested in reporting typos for changes please offer the corrections as well for ease of immortals who weren't involved in the original construction, but have enough time to find and edit the changes.

We appreciate the specific issues being bolded, highlighted, or otherwise made significantly different within the original post.

In an ideal world we would see:

alima wrote:
The Road in the Shadow of the Walls
The wide road passes alongside the southern walls of Seandar. Guards can
occasionally be seen passing atop the parapet, looking down at the passing
traffic. A line of people stream into and out of the city through the gates
to the west.
[ obvious exits: S W ]

This room is 1s, 1w, 1n of the southern seandar gate. Because of its positioning, the gate is actually to the EAST of this room, not the WEST.


The Road in the Shadow of the Walls
The wide road passes alongside the southern walls of Seandar. Guards can
occasionally be seen passing atop the parapet, looking down at the passing
traffic. A line of people stream into and out of the city through the gates
to the east.
[ obvious exits: S W ]



Oooh, gotcha! I'll make sure to do that next time =)

Re: Typos

Post by Feneon » Wed Jul 12, 2017 10:02 pm

If you are interested in reporting typos for changes please offer the corrections as well for ease of immortals who weren't involved in the original construction, but have enough time to find and edit the changes.

We appreciate the specific issues being bolded, highlighted, or otherwise made significantly different within the original post.

In an ideal world we would see:

alima wrote:
The Road in the Shadow of the Walls
The wide road passes alongside the southern walls of Seandar. Guards can
occasionally be seen passing atop the parapet, looking down at the passing
traffic. A line of people stream into and out of the city through the gates
to the west.
[ obvious exits: S W ]

This room is 1s, 1w, 1n of the southern seandar gate. Because of its positioning, the gate is actually to the EAST of this room, not the WEST.


The Road in the Shadow of the Walls
The wide road passes alongside the southern walls of Seandar. Guards can
occasionally be seen passing atop the parapet, looking down at the passing
traffic. A line of people stream into and out of the city through the gates
to the east.
[ obvious exits: S W ]

Re: Typos

Post by alima » Wed Jul 12, 2017 4:41 pm

* HP:Wounded MV:Tiring > The Road in the Shadow of the Walls
The wide road passes alongside the southern walls of Seandar. Guards can
occasionally be seen passing atop the parapet, looking down at the passing
traffic. A line of people stream into and out of the city through the gates
to the west.

[ obvious exits: S W ]

This room is 1s, 1w, 1n of the southern seandar gate. Because of its positioning, the gate is actually to the EAST of this room, not the WEST.

Fixed

Re: Typos

Post by Alaina » Tue Jul 11, 2017 8:59 pm

When you look pigeon...


A black messenger pigeon has arrived from the east.
A sleek blck pigeon twitches his head back and forth. Specially bred for
their silent behavior, these long flying birds are trained to both be quiet
when out with the scouts and to fly swiftly back home.

Re: Typos

Post by Paj » Tue May 30, 2017 9:58 pm

Heh. I looked at wrong vambracea at the end. But my point is still made. Period. The end.

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