Re: Typos

... post your favorite game bugs here for the coders' attention. Please, please, please, show the steps necessary to repeat the bug. Otherwise they can't be solved and they will be ignored...
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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Tue Nov 15, 2016 10:45 pm

Mob: Damian Kirke
Zone: Amador

Intelligent eyes peer out from a handsomely chisled face. Strands of black
hair break these lines, lending a youthful appearance to an obviously
experienced man.

Also two spaces between "a" and "handsomely".

Fixed 12/4-Cerys

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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Wed Nov 16, 2016 8:20 am

Mob: a fierce-looking mastiff
Location: Amador

Standing almost shoulder-high to an average-sized human, this huge
dog looks like it could easily rip you apart, however, you notice
that the dog seems fearful of a strangers' presence.

Fixed 12/4-Cerys

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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Wed Nov 16, 2016 1:59 pm

Mob: a shifty ogier


A massive ogier rises near twenty feet into the air. His copper colored
eyes sparkle from under a dark, brooding gaze, and by the eager looks of
green and envy at what you wear, it is clear that he has fallen into the
shadow. He bears shoulders capable of lifting the mountains themselves.

Thinking this should be "greed" instead of green.

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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Sat Nov 19, 2016 2:12 pm

Mob: a huge darkhound

Sleek and black as night, this is one of the Dark One's hunting hounds.
This particular beast is larger than other hounds you have encountered,
it's howls more fearsome, and it's bite certainly more deadly.

Fixed 12/4-Cerys

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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Sat Nov 19, 2016 2:24 pm

Mob: a hound of the shadow

Something dark stands here, too dark to make out what it actually is. It
walks in and out the shadows, and all you can see are a pair of blood-red
eyes that flicker in and out of view. But, every so often, you can hear a
deep growls, snarls and yelps, the sound of a hound of the shadow.

Should probably remove that "a" given the plural growls, snarls, and yelps

Fixed 12/4-Cerys

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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Mon Nov 21, 2016 8:44 pm

Zone: Cairhien Province
Room: A Chamber

Lavish ornaments decorate this regal throne room. Standing in the center
of the room on a small dais is a high-backed chair that can easily fit two
abroad. The room is long and narrow with and thin purple carpet leading to
the throne. Torches fastened to the wall shine brightly, leaving no dark
corners.

Fixed 12/4-Cerys

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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Tue Nov 22, 2016 8:34 pm

Mob: a renegade commander

A tall and chiseled man of arms, this commander radiates enforced order. A
thin, ugly scar runs from his left eyebrow, down his cheek and neck, and
disapears under his breast plate. Failing to jump when hearing the first
sound of the word would likely cause a list of additional chores around the
next campsite.

and maybe "breastplate" instead of "breast plate"?

Fixed 12/4-Cerys

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Re: Typos

Postby medina » Fri Nov 25, 2016 4:06 am

Book sorting in White Tower:

a map of the defunct kingdom of Carralain

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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Tue Nov 29, 2016 9:46 pm

Mob: Lord Agelmar

Like all fighting men of Shienar, his head is completely shaved except
for a topknot, and that pure white. His only sign of age other than his
white hair, are small creases at the corner of his eyes. Even at his age
this is someone you would not want to anger.

The comma after "hair" should either be removed or an additional one placed after "sign of age". There is also an extra space before the first word of the description.

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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Tue Nov 29, 2016 10:12 pm

Item: a hitching harness

A horses harness lies here unused.

Should be "horse's".
Last edited by Elysia on Fri Dec 02, 2016 2:20 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed


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