Re: Typos

... post your favorite game bugs here for the coders' attention. Please, please, please, show the steps necessary to repeat the bug. Otherwise they can't be solved and they will be ignored...
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Re: Typos

Postby Weir » Sun Dec 04, 2016 2:55 pm

I swear, do you just walk around looking at every single thing intently while you play? :P

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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Sun Dec 04, 2016 3:14 pm

Nah it's easy, I'm adding most of this stuff to the wiki, and the browser shows typos automatically, so it's just cut and paste for me.

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Re: Typos

Postby chyga » Mon Dec 05, 2016 11:02 am

Clive says 'Forums are your friend! The web address is www.wotmud.org/forums - there is a Help forum there with lots of information and you can post topics for help.'

should be wotmod.org
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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Mon Dec 05, 2016 9:07 pm

Item: the Falme gatekey

A simple, but important looking key lies here

-missing a period on the end
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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Sat Dec 10, 2016 7:54 pm

Mob: a maned wolf

This enormous wolf has a thick mane of gray and black, which stands out in
sharp contrast to the muted gray fur of his muscular body. His blood-red
eyes scan intently for prey as he sniffs the air. Dried blood cakes his lips,
and he snarls fiercly, as you approach.

-That last comma should also probably go.
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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Sun Dec 11, 2016 12:50 am

Mob: a disgraced Arafellin officer

Pale skinned with dark eyes, this man has an air of command about him.
However, his clothes are worn and the markings of an officer he wears have
a tattered look about him. He obviously has not been keeping in line with
military discipline. His dark hair has been divided into a multitude of
braids, each with a bell attached to the end, marking him as an Arafellin.


Mob: a Shienaran deserter

Pale skinned with dark eyes, this man has an air of command about him. His
armor has been meticulously maintained, however, his clothes are worn and
the markings of an officer he wears have a tattered look about them. He
obviously has not been keeping in line with military discipline. His dark
hair has been divided into a multitude of braids, each with a bell attached
to the end, marking him as an Arafellin.

-A number of things here. It looks like there is copying/overlap of their descriptions. The minion mob's description looks more complete and would probably fit the officer better. Also, the minion is "a Shienaran deserter" yet he is described as Arafellin, though both mobs are loading in Shienar.
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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Sun Dec 11, 2016 5:51 pm

Mob: a dark, furtive figure

A dark-clad figure passes quietly by.

* R HP:Healthy MV:Full > l figure
A dark, furtive figure is in excellent condition.

a dark, furtive figure is using:
<worn on head> a wide-brimmed hat
<worn about body> a dark, hooded cloak
<worn on hands> a thin pair of soft boarskin gloves
<wielded> an ebony shortblade
<worn on legs> a black pair of pants
<worn on feet> a pair of light leather boots

You attempt to peek at the inventory:
You can't see anything.

-He seems to have no detailed description.
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Re: Typos

Postby Marcellis » Sun Dec 11, 2016 7:21 pm

mob: Havien Nurelle, Lord Lieutenant of the Winged Guards, stands here.


* HP:Healthy SP:Bursting MV:Full > l havien
This young man has a long dark hair that frames his pink cheeked face. He
must be in his early twenties, but already he has gained the position of a
Lord Lieutenant in the Winged Guard of Mayene. His cold, expressionless
gray eyes command respect and obedience and his armor is highly polished,
and gleams. His flowing cloak bearing the Hawk of Mayene is spotless, and
his hand rests on the hilt of his sword casually but firmly.

The 'a' regarding his hair ought to be removed.
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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Tue Dec 13, 2016 7:20 pm

Mob: a hand-covered tentacle

A giant and slimy tentacle breaks the surface of the water here. Giant
pseudopods and what appears to be human-hands cover the surface of the
tentacle. The hands open and close eagerly, blindly grasping for
sustenence. Whatever foul beast lies at the center of this lake, this
is but one small part of it.
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Re: Typos

Postby Thuvia » Tue Dec 13, 2016 7:54 pm

Mob: a fierce Aiel warrior

Eyes fierce, an Aiel warrior follows his chieftan.

This well armed Aiel looks lean, his features carved by harsh conditions.
He follows his chieftan with mindless devotion, sure in his loyalty and
belief in the man who leads him.
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