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Re: Typos

Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2017 10:23 pm
by alima
* R HP:Healthy MV:Full >
The bark docks at Falme in a fluid motion.

* R HP:Healthy MV:Full > look
Aboard the Red Herring
A strong and sturdy boat, this three-masted bark has sufficient
accommodation for a large amount of people and cargo and the ability to
sustain them for a longer journey. Although judging from the rigging and
sails it is not originally a Seanchan vessel, it now serves the Empire. A
skiff is hanging in brackets on the starboard side.
[ obvious exits: ]
Talroc the Officer is standing here.
|1|.A warhorse is here, stamping his feet impatiently, being ridden by you.
A captain stands here, giving orders.

This is the boat from Tremalking to Falme.

Should probably be:

The boat docks at Falme in a fluid motion.

Re: Typos

Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2017 4:13 pm
by Vampa
That's just a red herring.

bark or barque (bɑrk)

1. a sailing vessel having three or more masts, square-rigged on all but the aftermost.
2. (formerly) any boat or sailing vessel.

Re: Typos

Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2017 10:57 pm
by alima
You're so punny!

Re: Typos

Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2017 12:56 pm
by Tamira
A Domani man is in the room.
A Domani woman walks into the room.
A Domani man says to a Domani woman, "blah blah blah blah"
A Domani man says 'I would give you all I am, if you were mind.'

Re: Typos

Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2017 10:42 pm
by Taziar
Tanchico Road zone: Old entrance to Elmora cutoff.

Bend in the Path
The path turns slightly to the south-west due to the thick population of
trees, bushes and other plants growing in the south. The path continues to
the west and north, but a recently cut trail to the east pushes into the
Tarabon woodlands.

[ obvious exits: N W ]

Since the connection with the zone to the east is now gone the last half of the last sentence either needs to be adjusted or removed.