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Re: Typos

Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2017 12:22 am
by Taziar
Checked paper again from Patros Leander, looks like you did fix it Elysia but there is a typo in the word Complex.

There is something written upon it:

Patros, I know of your involvement. Come to the Farming Complext if you dare and we can settle this like men.

Re: Typos

Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2017 5:25 pm
by Naerin
Altara, around w 2s 2w of the town

Room name: On the Wide Plains Road

The road is wide enough to let two wagons pass eachother comfortably. The
road takes a turn to the south, where it ventures deeper into grassland. To
the north and east the plains extend into the distance. Off in the distance
to the northwest, what appears to be a roof of a cabin can be seen. To the
east the road continues towards the gently rolling hills.

Re: Typos

Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2017 8:10 pm
by Naerin
What's the rule on when to capitalize 'off'?

There are 2n e and 3n e Caemlyn north gate, respectively:

* R HP:Healthy MV:Fresh > Braem Wood off the Road
The outskirts of the Braem Wood start here, with oak saplings, bushes and
conifers arranged according to nature's whim. The sounds of traffic can be
heard to the west, while the way east leads you into the Braem Wood.
Although there are plenty of scrubs, trees and bushes visible to the south,
the way is blocked by the city walls that are visible in the distance.
[ obvious exits: N E W ]
|1|.A gray palfrey prances skittishly nearby, being ridden by you.

* R HP:Healthy MV:Fresh > n
Braem Wood Off Tar Valon Road
East of the road between Caemlyn and Tar Valon, the Braem Woods thicken
quickly, hiding the sky behind a dense canopy of leaves and stout branches.
The woods thicken to the east, darkening, forbidding. Small animals can be
seen along the forest floor, scurrying for the safety of their boroughs.
[ obvious exits: E S W ]
There are some tracks of a ridden mount leaving south.
There are some tracks of an animal leaving east.
There are some tracks of an animal leaving east.
There are some tracks of an animal leaving east.
|1|.A gray palfrey prances skittishly nearby, being ridden by you.
A young and strong buck is here, munching some grass.

Re: Typos

Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2017 1:05 pm
by Vyo
Altara:

On the Road to Jehannah
Stretching out for miles upon miles in every direction, the yellow sea of
grass encompasses all things on the plains of Altara, including the broad
stretch of merchant road that leads to the Ghealdanin capital of Jehannah.
The golden stalks of prairie grass hide the small animals that make their
home in them. Only soft sounds, adding to the general symphony of the
plains, give away the presence of these anminals.

North of Cairhien:

Fields Beside the Road
The fields along this eastern edge of the road appear to have been
abandoned. The grains have begun to grow wild and a mixture of weeds has
taken root. The road seems to curve around this field, as if avoiding the
area. A. wall of jumbled rocks interspersed with weeds lies to the north. (extra space)
Small wisps of dust cloud the air as winds whip quickly by.

Re: Typos

Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2017 9:28 pm
by laci
* HP:Healthy MV:Full - a forest brigand: Scratched > lo
Inside the Hill
This tunnel has been carved into the very bedrock of the hill, leaving
the walls as smooth as pollished glass and just as level. The ceiling
is at least twenty feet from the floor, which is covered by blood red
tiles that are arranged into an animal of some kind. A staircase spirals
up to the ceiling near the northern end of the tunnel.
[ obvious exits: S U ]
Up: Bianca the Tower Accepted is standing here.
The corpse of a brigand sentry is lying here. [2]
An older man with a crooked smile glares at you.
A forest brigand is here, fighting YOU!
A forest brigand is here, fighting Aishana.
A slimey looking man rubs his hands together.
A forest brigand is here, fighting Aishana.
A forest brigand is here, fighting YOU!
Aishana the Tower Accepted is here, fighting a forest brigand.



Should be: A slimy looking man rubs his hands together.