Re: Typos

... post your favorite game bugs here for the coders' attention. Please, please, please, show the steps necessary to repeat the bug. Otherwise they can't be solved and they will be ignored...
Dartes
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Re: Typos

Post by Dartes » Sat Dec 07, 2019 12:28 pm

Reyne wrote:
Fri Dec 06, 2019 11:47 pm
Jaye wrote:
Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:57 pm
In New Blight - second line - should be traveller.
Brits always spelling things all weird :p
Next thing you'll know, they'll try and rename all of the "Armour" Shops!!

Jaye
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Re: Typos

Post by Jaye » Sat Dec 07, 2019 5:44 pm

Dartes wrote:
Sat Dec 07, 2019 12:28 pm
Reyne wrote:
Fri Dec 06, 2019 11:47 pm
Jaye wrote:
Fri Dec 06, 2019 2:57 pm
In New Blight - second line - should be traveller.
Brits always spelling things all weird :p
Next thing you'll know, they'll try and rename all of the "Armour" Shops!!
I genuinely had no idea that was an Americanism! Apologies

Reyne
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Re: Typos

Post by Reyne » Thu Dec 12, 2019 10:48 pm

3n Tower Square:
A Large Entrance Hall
Archways almost surround the large round entrance hall with its flat-domed
ceiling. The pale stone floor has been worn and polished by countless
nervous feet over the centuries. A marble frieze decorated in elaborate
vines and leaves runs along the walls deeper into the Tower. Fluted columns
runs along the walls deeper into the Tower. Fluted column
rise from the floor by the walls and reach to the twenty pace high ceiling.
Something seems wonky here... but either way that second 'fluted column' should be plural.
Last edited by Elysia on Thu Jun 04, 2020 8:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed with Tower change.

Jaye
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Re: Typos

Post by Jaye » Fri Dec 13, 2019 5:13 am

Reyne wrote:
Thu Dec 12, 2019 10:48 pm
Fluted columns
runs along the walls deeper into the Tower. Fluted column
rise from the floor by the walls and reach to the twenty pace high ceiling.
Something seems wonky here... but either way that second 'fluted column' should be plural.
And it should be run in the first sentence. I'd suggest merging the sentences like: 'Fluted columns rise twenty paces from the floor to support the high ceiling, running along the walls deeper into the Tower.'
Last edited by Elysia on Thu Jun 04, 2020 8:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed with Tower change.

Rajis
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Re: Typos

Post by Rajis » Wed Dec 18, 2019 4:56 pm

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The Turquoise Lake
Smooth green-blue waters of the lake lap gently against the black and gray
rocks on the shore to the south and west. A small fast-moving stream fills
the lake with oxygenated water, allowing the fish and other aquatic wild
life to develop and grow. Some water [b]lillies[/b] and clumps of [b]reads[/b] grow near
the banks of the lake.
Should be lilies and reeds.

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The Quiet Green Waters
The waters of the lake go all around the small island to the west. The
surface of the pool is calm and the color of the water a green-blue. The
water deepens to the south where it is a little darker in color. Reeds and
water lillies grow at the edge of the pond on the western bank
Needs a period at the end.

Rajis
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Re: Typos

Post by Rajis » Thu Dec 19, 2019 3:36 pm

Shrubs on a Green Sloping Hill
The green foliage of the canopy over head, provided by the trees affords
protection from the wind and rain. Thich green wiry moss covers the roots
of the trees and most of the shaded area under the main trunk. In places
the smooth sandstone or black granite can be seen to stick up from under
the ground level fauna.
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Reason: Fixed.

Rajis
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Re: Typos

Post by Rajis » Thu Dec 19, 2019 3:52 pm

The Grassy Ridge
A solitary chestnut tree stands above the birch and maples which are
scattered across the wooded ridge. Under the chestnut several of its
produce can be seen lying in the dry soil. The top of the tree is often
covered with large hand shaped leaves. A large bird's nest can be seen
perched precariously near the top of the towering giant tree.
[ obvious exits: E S ]
Zone: The Dry Forest
A Tairen destrier barded in black and gold stands here, being ridden by you.

* R HP:Wounded MV:Fresh >
l nest
Twigs and small branches are collected together and form a large platelike
arrangement. Pigeons continue to use the nest when they are have eggs or
young to rear.
Last edited by Elysia on Thu Jun 04, 2020 8:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed.

Tiani
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Re: Typos

Post by Tiani » Sun Dec 22, 2019 11:23 am

Tiani - Small Farmyard

* R HP:Healthy MV:Strong >
A dynamic event is occuring nearby.

Ind the farmer's wife and ask if she needs help.
Last edited by Elysia on Thu Jun 04, 2020 8:53 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Fixed.

Mashad
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Re: Typos

Post by Mashad » Wed Jan 08, 2020 2:21 pm

Machin has no description!

l wind
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It has no description.

The Machin Shin is in excellent condition.

You attempt to peek at the inventory:
You can't see anything.
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Reason: Fixed.

Quintilius
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Re: Typos

Post by Quintilius » Wed Jan 15, 2020 12:29 pm

Didn't really want to make a whole new thread; not to be too Millennial about this or whatnot but can we change the following:
A slant-eyed sentry keeps vigilant watch here.
?
Last edited by Elysia on Thu Jun 04, 2020 8:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Many mobs with these types of descriptions were changed. If you find one, it's probably unintended.

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